Saturday, May 31, 2008

When The Heart Speaks...

TIME...

An indistinct sound of music
Humming in my ears,
Playing an old song that I used to sing…
Arousing the past memories
As if everything happens yesterday.
Happiness and sadness
All at once
Drew a full house in my heart…
Standing here,
Stuck in the middle of marching time
Wish I could turn back the time
Went back to the time that had been left behind
Covers all mistakes that I had done before
Went through all happy moments that I used to had
Oh past…how I missed you

No…
I shall not look back to the past
I have left it behind…and that’s how it should be…
Let bygones be bygones
I learned nothing if my life are always so perfect
Mistakes teach us how to grow.
Past cheeriness,
Let it remains in my memory…
Hope it will shine my future towards happiness.
Tomorrow will be today...and today will be yesterday
Time waits for nobody...
I will grab and hold on tight for my future.
I shall live my life the fullest.

~Yay.. I wrote this...I tried my very best to use 'poetic' words..correct me if I'm wrong..do not hesitate to give suggestion,if you have any better words to replace mine...thanks~

5 comments:

sunnyside up said...

That was superb. Don't worry---by being 'poetic', we can get away with alot of things. There is no such errors when we are being poetic. Continue writing them

I like some of the phrases and expressions that you use. It remind me of a song 'Time In a Bottle."

Search for the lyrics and tell me what you feel .

sunnyside up said...

That was superb. Don't worry---by being 'poetic', we can get away with alot of things. There is no such errors when we are being poetic. Continue writing them

I like some of the phrases and expressions that you use. It reminds me of a song 'Time In a Bottle."

Search for the lyrics and tell me what you feel .

sunnyside up said...

Just thought i post it 4 u.

If I could save Time in a bottle
The first thing that I'd like to do
Is to save every day
'til Eternity passes away
Just to spend them with you

If I could make days last forever
If words could make wishes come true
I'd save every day like a treasure and then,
Again, I would spend them with you

But there never seems to be enough time
To do the things you want to do
Once you find them
I've looked around enough to know
That you're the one I want to go
Through time with

If I had a box just for wishes
And dreams that had never come true
The box would be empty
Except for the memory
Of how they were answered by you

But there never seems to be enough time
To do the things you want to do
Once you find them
I've looked around enough to know
That you're the one I want to go
Through time with

joethel said...

Wow...nice lyrics...who is the singer for the song?

Thanks for the compliment...I will surely write more and hope fully with more 'poetic' words...

I'll show how 'jiwang' I am..haha

sunnyside up said...

Hi ms jiwang and moody but cute
The singer of that song is Jim Croce.

And , yes yes yes yes do write more.
Ok show us your jiwang side.